Tuesday, 7 February 2012

Phrase & Peer Feedback (Travelling across the floor)

I thought it would be useful for me to film a phrase and to get peer feedback on how I can improve. this phrase involves moving across the floor making sure it is fluid and it almost skims across the floor in one motion. For me this is exactly what I was thinking about, making sure there were no sudden movements that would make the phrase look awkward and difficult. Here is the phrase.


After this I perfromed it to my peers and they gave feedback on what they saw. Thankfully they noticed the fluidity I wanted to show. For me this is important as the phrase is on the floor and a bit complicated with the legs, having long legs I found this phrase a little difficult to keep it smooth and low to the ground. this is my feedback and i agree with the end comments that Yoga will help me more to keep my core engaged all of the time and to keepp lifted up off the floor.


Do you have any more comments to give me from this piece? Maybe you could suggest more feedback reguarding keeping the smoothness or the overall look?

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